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[edit] FAN page redesign

Good eeeevening Comrade Oohnit. I put together an idea for a redesigning of the featured article nominations page. You can find it here. To go along with that, please see my idea for how the Council of Seers namespace pages would be set up. My idea can be found here. After looking at the CS namespace example page, be sure to read my detailed explanation of how that page would work. You can find that explanation here. Please get back to me on this ASAP. I’m not going to bother with a CT on this since it doesn’t really require any sort of community vote or discussion, so once a majority of the Seers get back to me I’ll set everything up. Don’t worry, this isn’t extra work for you. I’ll take care of all of it. File:Tongue.gif - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 22:18, 1 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Epin Lanmaw GAN

Just so you know, I corrected your objections on Epin Lanmaw. - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 19:36, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Remaining Ahara objections

Please see the Ahara objections section on this page to view a list of all of the objections you have yet to correct for the Battle of Ahara. In the future, when you say you've corrected all objections, you need to have corrected all objections. This could have been done quite awhile ago. - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 21:49, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Cruentus logo

How's this? Do you want me to change anything or add the words "Star Wars" above "Cruentus"? Drewton (Drewton's Holocron) 00:59, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re:

Thanks. I wasn't planning to make another faction maybe, just people that were involved. Minor people who did one great thing in the era. MecenarylordEnter if you dare 21:57, 16 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Re: Tahu

Unit, I'm going to have to ask you to stop asking me about this. You know full well that I have a lot of stuff to do outside of SWF and the Seers, and I get to reviews when I can. Because Tahu has already been halfway (or however long) reviewed, it's not my top priority. Why not go bug MPK? Or JM76? Or Solus? - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 20:04, 25 March 2009 (UTC)

  • No, you have asked me via IRC, and other members of your project have asked me. You've also asked me, specifically, to do your reviews in the past, meaning you're ignoring the fact that there are 7 other Seers (not counting you and me). - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 20:18, 25 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Special CASWFN Edition


                 
April 1, 2009
The Completely ALTERNATIVE Star Wars Fanon Newsletter

Volume 1, Edition 1 - April, 2009


Greetings, mortals comrade citizens of the Star Wars Fanon community. We have here for you a very special message.

[edit] Friends, fanonites, countrymen, lend me your ears…er, eyes…whatever…just run the tape

Welcome to another issue of CUSWFN CASWFN, delivered fresh to your user talk page/subpage for April, 2009! Inside this issue, we have a interview with Solus, as well as a picture of the day, fanon updates, Star Wars merchandise page, Star Wars Fanon news, FA/GA updates, and user comments. In other words, everything that this publication should normally have, but usually doesn't, or doesn't have to the satisfaction of the majority (or at least a vocal minority) of the readers. However, first we have a special address from the editor for the main newsletter page:

By now, you've probably realized that this issue is not part of the CUSWFN, nor is it written by the usual culprits. No, instead we got tired of waiting around for the *actual* CUSWFN and decided to make our own, special one-issue-only release. We're not sure what happened to the actual heads. Word has it one of them is busy with the Communist party and the other is playing with children's toys. Please direct all complaints to them and not us. Especially since we're not revealing our names. In fact, we just conned Ataru into uploading this for us because he's a convenient fall guy.

As such, this issue is labeled the CASWFN, the Completely Alternative Star Wars Fanon Newsletter, due to the fact that it is not part of the standard newsletter. And, since it's not part of that mess, we felt that we could take a few more creative liberties with the content. As such, there is no compunction for us to be as serious in this issue, so you might find the content a bit more satirical. The date of this release also has something to do with that. Our goal is both provide a level of humor and content missing from CUSWFN issues, and frankly, to have fun with this publication. We hope you'll enjoy this special release of CASWFN, and remember, if you've been wishing you got more issues of the usual newsletter, talk to the normal heads.


CASWFN edition one and only
Editor in chief: <insert name here>
The names of staff and contributors are withheld to protect their identities from the mad rantings and possibly being sent to gulags in Siberia.

[edit] 0-0

April 1st Prank --YourStalker079(Watching) 08:45, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] CUSWFN

"However, we regret to inform you that due to computer problems, co-editor Drewton has been unable to contribute greatly. For this reason, and in light of the current date, Unit 8311 has decided to do a quick release to put an end to the usual whining. "
—You

Probably for April Fools, lol, but just to make sure, I hope you're not planning to release it how it is right now. It needs major work. We've had two or three rushed issues; we can't have another one rushed. We should be waiting however long it takes us to do it as long as we can achieve good, non-rushed quality. Again, unless if you meant it as an April Fools joke, in which case, well done lol. Either way, I have some free time right now so I've started working on it again. Drewton (Drewton's Holocron) 15:50, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] my article cleanup

hey thanks for fixing my article on jade nion. i really aprrecate it!!!!!!!!!!!

[edit] Resignation

Unit, please see this. I'm sorry if it feels like I'm putting all the pressure on you, but I really think I've been more of a hindrance lately. Drewton (Drewton's Holocron) 03:38, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Request for Seership page

I just wanted to make you aware of this page that I created last night, as well as the nominee that's there. - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 19:37, 21 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Hows it going?

Hey, hows it going? I looked at the CUSWFN edition and I am willing to help if you need it. Darth Craetor 03:19, 23 April 2009 (UTC)


[edit] Cruentus novel update

I hadn't looked at it yet no. I'll do so as soon as I can though. Sorry I didn't reply in IRC, the hubby was having me look up a bunch of stuff and I didn't see it till I was logging off. --Kathkira talk 23:04, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Tahu FAN

Hey Unit. Would you mind thinking about removing your nomination for the Battle of Tahu? It's clear that no one's going to look over it anytime soon, so it's just wasting away on the FAN page and acting as nothing more than a waste of space. I myself have tried reviewing it a couple of times but, I have to say, it's kind of painful. I'd suggest using the knowledge you've gained of FA requirements since writing it and give it a good rewrite. It could use it, in my opinion. Just my two cents. - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 06:33, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

  • There are just errors throughout it in terms of the quality of the prose, in addition to the usual problems with Cruentus articles. It's not worth it for me to put up a more detailed review. It would be too long and a waste of my time. It's better that you just rewrite it because, FYI, Vic and Solus's objections did not involve having to rewrite the article. - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 16:18, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] MPK's essay

Unit, since my essay's not finished and MPK's is, wouldn't it be better to replace mine with his for this edition? Drewton (Drewton's Holocron) 18:46, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

I have more time now with summer approaching and I've started planning and writing a large edition for CUSWFN; is that alright with you? I wouldn't want to take too long though, so if so, don't wait anymore than two weeks for me. Drewton (Drewton's Holocron) 01:21, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] IRC Conversations (Comeback)

Hey Unit. I'm not sure if you remember, but there used to be a section in the CUSWFN for IRC conversations about various topics. One has already been published with Darth tom being interviewed with me. Here is a link to 2 more IRC conversations, one about Early SWF with JM76 and another with C3POtheDS about Avian Hunt. All were fixed up and slowly made into a readable article, here. If you want more, I will be happy to make more in the near future but there are 2 conversations done for two issues. Another can be made in some weeks with Tom and I about his Novel and then a conversation about Brandon on the current issues of the site or maybe just his novel/s. So how about it? --Arav (Ancient Grove) (Lost Archives) 06:56, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Election

See here. - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 06:59, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

  • You were consulted when I tried to talk to you yesterday, but you instead decided to act like a drunk Boris Yeltsin so I gave up in trying to talk maturely with you on IRC. Besides, per what I just said in the forum, your permission is not required to elect a new co-head. You don't "control" CUSWFN. - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 16:17, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Yes, that's exactly what I was trying to get to, but I gave up because I couldn't find Comrade Oohnit behind President Yeltsin. File:Tongue.gif - Brandon Rhea (talk) (contribs) 16:23, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] RE:Incidentally

Sure. Do you have any plans for nominated the Battle of Toydaria for GA or FA? Also, if you could check out my comments regarding PC on the Toydaria talk page, that'd be great. -- Joe Butler (Talk to me) 21:03, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I have another question, like I said on the battle talk page: since I was 'booted out' of the project due to inactivity, does that mean I'm forbidden from ever joining again, or what? -- Joe Butler (Talk to me) 21:23, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

The Battle of Taanab is pretty much finished. -- Joe Butler (Talk to me) 22:54, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Raptor Immediate Deletion

I was wondering if you would like to take a look at my Raptor article and tell me if you see anymore errors in the article? Thanks Darth Void (Talk) 18:43, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Srav Weaponry

Hey Unit, I was wondering if I could use some of the Srav weaponry, as well as the Tsarka bomb, in one of my new articles, the Honorable Union of Desevro & Tion. -- Dark Lord Storm (Holonet) (Korriban Library)

[edit] ECM

What does ECM stand for? -- Joe Butler (Talk to me) 14:31, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

Thanks. Also, do you have a projection as to when the next CUSWFN will be done? -- Joe Butler (Talk to me) 14:57, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

Sounds good. If you need any help with it, feel free to ask me. -- Joe Butler (Talk to me) 15:03, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

My apologies. I guess I just got a bit excited. File:Grin.gif. Yeah, it can either be pulled or, as you suggested, other seers can refrain from adding more objections until it is cleaned up a bit more. -- Joe Butler (Talk to me) 10:48, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

Can you come on IRC to discuss the battle? -- Joe Butler (Talk to me) 21:13, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

Hey, sorry about yesterday on the IRC; I have at least a half hour for sure now; want to come on IRC? -- Joe Butler (Talk to me) 20:10, 3 June 2009 (UTC)

I'm back on IRC now. -- Joe Butler (Talk to me) 21:06, 3 June 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Renard slipstream

Here is a review for Renard slipstream:

  • Get rid of the comma after "Cruentusian War". By placing that comma there, if you remove the phrase within the comma you'll find that it says "during the Cruentusian War that enabled it to be used". This implies that it enables the war to be used. Personally, I'd rewrite the entire sentence to say "The Renard slipstream was a tactical maneuver created by the Necasian Military pilot Renard Curl during the Cruentusian War. The tactic was designed for use by the DarkBird-class attack fighter, enabling the fighter to be used against ground-based enemies." It's a lot better that way.
  • "Nonetheless, only the pilots considered the most skilled could pull it off." - Very awkward wording.
  • The "consisted of flying" sentence should be rewritten like so: "To perform the maneuver, a pilot would fly very low over concentrated ground enemies while simultaneously performing a barrel roll."
  • Rather than saying "Renard" in the last sentence, you should refer to him as "Curl". It's more encyclopedic that way.

Make those corrections and I'll have a few other people check over the article. Then we can remove the tags if that group is satisfied. - Brandon Rhea (talk) 21:00, 4 June 2009 (UTC)


[edit] PotE?

Do you think the Picture of the Week section should be changed to Picture of the Edition, as the issue takes 2-3 weeks for creation? Also, would [[File:GanGanHeadshot.jpg]] be a good image for the title? Brandon said it's your decision.--Arav (Ancient Grove) (Lost Archives) 04:26, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Release

"Sorry, no time right now, but thanks anyway."
—You[src]

Just so you know, I wasn't asking you to do it now. Whenever you have time, the email would be appreciated. Considering I came aboard to increase the quality of the newsletter, I wanted to make sure everything has been given a proper read through and edit before it's released. I don't want to be surprised by seeing your stuff released without it being looked over or anything. - Brandon Rhea (talk) 19:00, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

[edit] CUSWFN – Edition 23


                 

Welcome to the twenty-third edition of the Star Wars Fanon wiki’s very own Completely Unofficial Star Wars Fanon Newsletter! For this twenty-third edition, we welcome a new co-editor, Brandon Rhea, to the team! He will be working alongside long-time editor Unit 8311 to bring you the best quality news about the wiki and fan fiction, as well as editorials and opinions essays about Star Wars works, that this wiki has to offer. A little bit of trivia information is that Rhea, along with fellow Star Wars Fanon user Victor Dorantes, has served as the co-editor of the newsletter once before, but he and Dorantes resigned before releasing an issue due to other commitments that required their attention. We are happy that he has returned to us once again!

In this edition, you will be able to learn new exclusive information about fan works such as the Squishy Vic Series and Avian Hunt, as well as read news about other works sponsored by this newsletter. We also have an opinion essay written by our own Unit 8311, and the newly-renamed Picture of the Edition segment. We have also brought you up-to-date information about new policy proposals and other happenings around the wiki, such as the ongoing mass deletion process that is geared towards improving the quality of the wiki.

Speaking of quality, many users have remarked that the last few editions of this newsletter have not met the standards of quality that our readers have come to expect from us. It is our sincerest hope that this edition of the newsletter will be the first of many that will rectify that, as we have spent weeks working on articles, editorials, and other tidbits that we hope you will enjoy. Because we are striving to improve our quality, we very much encourage you to leave your comments and feedback in the User Comments section. Anything you have to say will be appreciated.

As always, thank you for reading the Completely Unofficial Star Wars Fanon Newsletter. We value your commitment to us, and we hope that you will continue to value our commitment to you!


Edition XXIII

[edit] CUSWFN Help?

Hey mate, I was curious if there was anything I could do to help out here for CUSWFN, I need to do something ;) Drop me a line, and I will take care of it, just, not delivery, I hated doing that, with passion! I wished I had a bot at the time to do it ;) TaderTalk 04:01, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

[edit] RE: NPOV

E-999 Anti-armor cannon

  • It amounted to an enormous chaingun…” – “enormous” sounds POV-ish.
  • and weighed so much that it was nearly impossible to hold without” – That sounds a bit POV-ish. You could probably change that to something along the lines of “…nearly impossible for a regular FIST operative to hold…

Battle of Demos

  • Introduction
    • Unfortunately for them, the planet…” – “unfortunately” sounds POV-ish.

Battle of Volgis

  • Opening moves
    • First paragraph – “Taung Intelligence soon discovered that the Srav were launching an enormous fleet…” – “enormous” sounds POV-ish
  • Landing
    • Second paragraph – “Artillery fire rained down on the Taung, but unfortunately for the Sravs,” – “unfortunately” sounds POV-ish

That’s it. - Nacen (Talk) 16:43, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Request for Seership

Hey, I just wanted to make you aware that there's a new nomination for Seership here. - Brandon Rhea (talk) 19:23, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

[edit] RE:Cruentus

Alright, sorry for not getting back to you sooner, I was vacationing in the Poconos File:Wink.gif. Anyways, I may be over my head in this. I could do my best to try and get the mod done, but I honestly have made little progress, and I have AP and summer reading to do. We'll see where the mod goes, but I'm beginning to think I'm way in over my head. --JediCommando (Talk) 20:56, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Images

Hey Unit. I see that you're going and sourcing some unsourced images. When you do so, please italicize names of books, movies, TV shows, games, etc. Thanks. - Brandon Rhea (talk) 18:57, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

  • Just wanted to remind you about this, because you're still not doing it. Thanks. - Brandon Rhea (talk) 21:24, 8 July 2009 (UTC)

[edit] RE: Question

Well, I'm semi-active enough. :)

I suppose you want to discuss this over IRC? Darth Mavoc (Talk) 22:49, 5 July 2009 (UTC)

I'm heading to IRC now, then. Darth Mavoc (Talk) 23:12, 5 July 2009 (UTC)

Well if you are on, I suppose we can talk over IRC. Darth Mavoc (Talk) 22:39, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Cruentus

Hey Unit, is there any chance I could write a novel about the Taung-Srav campaigns in the Cruentusian War. -- Dark Lord Storm (Holonet) (Korriban Library)

Yeah of course you can make the articles, and thank you for correcting me. I look forward to more of your comments on it and will fix the issues you corrected me on. -- Dark Lord Storm (Holonet) (Korriban Library)

[edit] Re: IRC

I'm really busy right now. Sorry. - Brandon Rhea (talk) 19:07, 13 July 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Release

I got called into work today so I wasn't able to prep for release. It will be out tomorrow (Saturday). - Brandon Rhea (talk) 02:50, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

[edit] RE:Jervosa

The second one is closer to how I imagine her. - Joe (talk) 04:36, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

  • No, I don't mind. - Joe (talk) 22:31, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

[edit] CUSWFN

Unit, typing this on Blackberry. Internet died when formatting CUSWFN. All is done. Will release tomorrow afternoon. Very sorry. - Brandon Rhea (talk) 05:39, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

[edit] CUSWFN – Edition 24

Thank you for your continued commitment to the Completely Unofficial Star Wars Fanon Newsletter! Without you, this edition, albeit somewhat late due to real life matters taking priority for both Unit 8311 and Brandon Rhea, would not have been possible. We hope you enjoy it just as much as we do!