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[edit] Convicts Dawn

I know it's been a while but a lot of the things I have noticed in the stiry haven;t been cleaned up, namely your purple prose. I can't give my vote unless I can see a better improvement of quality, and it does not count if the story gets better as it goes along. Quality needs to be consistet. Katana Geldar 08:15, November 11, 2009 (UTC)