Talk:Star Wars: Episode I - The Chosen One

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Contents 1 Feedback 1.1 Tiny mistake: Prologue 2 Discussion 2.1 :) 2.2 Alternative Saga? 2.3 Approval 2.4 How Can I Help? 2.5 PDF 2.6 Cover 2.7 Plot summary

[edit] Feedback

Please use this discussion for critical feedback to The Chosen One.

[edit] Tiny mistake: Prologue

A destructive galactic civil war between the tyrannical Galactic Empire a band of freedom fighters attempting to restore democracy to the galaxy had just ended, and a New Republic was rising from the ashes of the Empire.

It needs an "and" after Galactic Empire.--Nightmare⁹⁷⁵ 08:02, 11 March 2009 (UTC)

• Thanks. - Brandon Rhea ^{(talk) (contribs)} 19:27, 11 March 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Discussion

Please use this section for general discussion about The Chosen One.

[edit]  :)

Glad you decided to stick with keeping Rune Haako and the other Neimoidians. Maybe Troyb can be in it, hmm? In my fanon, I'm just one of the commanders on the droid control ship. - Troyb^{AllSpark Quest contribs} 01:41, 22 November 2007 (UTC)

• I think I speak for Brandon when I say: "No." --Victor, Sr. ^{HoloNet 209} 05:35, 11 December 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Alternative Saga?

This is a cool idea. Me and my friend once tried to write alternate prequels, but keep same originals, but with interruptions and stuff we never got far - ours started in the Clone Wars. Maybe one day I'll finish em. Anyway, great work! --Johnvmaster 05:55, 9 February 2008 (UTC)

• Thanks for the compliment. Good luck if you ever restart your alternate prequels. - President Brandon Rhea (Pressroom) (Accomplishments) 06:20, 9 February 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Approval

We're proud to support The Chosen One as a sponsored CUSWFN Project! My page iChat What I've done 06:29, 25 May 2008 (UTC)

[edit] How Can I Help?

Is there anything I can do to help??? Like, get my wiki to help? or what?!!! —Unsigned comment by Jonn1234567890 (talk • contribs). Please sign your posts with ~~~~!

[edit] PDF

That would be cool if you could make it into a printable .pdf file.----£litolu | Talk to me | SWLOR | 5 03:44, 25 February 2009 (UTC)

• The current rewrite is a printable .PDF. You can find it here in the table of contents. Once I complete the Development section, I'll add all of that into this article. - Brandon Rhea ^{(talk) (contribs)} 03:46, 25 February 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Cover

I quite like the new cover. I'm not too sure what to say about the distinct lack of purple, though. — JM76 ^Ask _Archives 08:34, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

• lol. –Victor ^{(talk page)} 17:42, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Plot summary

I noticed that with majority of the characters, in the plot summary section, you primarily use their last name when referring to them. You do not, however, do the same with Obi-Wan. Is there a reason for this, or did I just make another stupid observation? -- ^{(Conference Room)} 01:56, September 23, 2009 (UTC)