Talk:Darth Abeonis

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Contents 1 Discussion 2 Quote 3 Proofreading? 4 Apologies 5 Dark Lord of the Sith 6 Re-edit 7 Picture Problem 8 Darth Maul 9 Good job 10 Praise

[edit] Discussion

Lumiya was Dark Lord of the Sith in 35 ABY.

• Yes, i noticed the dates were wrong last night, i just haven't had time to alter them. Jasca Ducato 07:59, 16 June 2006 (UTC)

This article is impressive. Welcome to SWFanon! Ewoksfist 19:14, 17 June 2006 (UTC)

This is the best article i've seen.--Malak 11:44, 27 June 2006 (UTC)

But one problem, I thought taris had been blown up my Malak's fleet?--Malak 04:14, 5 July 2006 (UTC)

• Erm, no. 1) Carth actually says that "not a building above two storys high was left standing", so the planet wasn't blown up; and 2) that was 4,000 years ago. Jasca Ducato 10:32, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
  • Taris was devastated but not completely blown up/destroyed. ^{My Userpage! Chat!}

[edit] Quote

"However, even one fateful word can change the fate of a galaxy…A Galaxy far far away…"

—JD's article

I love that quote, well done! Calaros 19:49, 5 July 2006 (UTC)

• Cheers, i won't say why i put it in, that'll ruin the story. I need to say though, it is not OOU, it is indeed an IU comment. Jasca Ducato 19:53, 5 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Proofreading?

Not to rain on anyone's parade, here, but it struck me as rather funny that an article that uses the word "born" four times in four sentences would be both article of the year... I didn't do anything about it out of respect for the original work, but I think it needs more than a few instances of rewording. JMHO, --Winchester 21:59, 6 July 2006 (UTC)

• It depends, over here in England (wehre i wrote it) it's not bad writing things like that. Jasca Ducato 17:06, 7 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Apologies

My brother decided to mess with your story not me, i shall be beating him shortly!! sorry again. Adamqd

[edit] Dark Lord of the Sith

Is there any way you could add in a storyline that says he at least lost his title to Lumiya in 88 ABY (so I could continue my storline with the Imperial Sith Order, and didn't gain it back until 103 ABY?

How'd you make the pic? ^{(Buy him a drink and chat) (Visit Atris) (Dark Side Illusion) (Extra-Galactic Space-Port)}

• Many hours of painful editing. Jasca Ducato _{Sith Council (Sith campaign)} 14:27, 22 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Re-edit

Very nice. Still the amazing article that got me hooked to this place. -- _{Talk to an Admin} ^{Mind Trick Jedi Library} 01:08, 6 January 2007 (UTC)

I think its sad how the Tarisians treated Jasca after the Yuuzhan Vong War. I feel sorry for him. Master Qui-Gon 27 January 2007

[edit] Picture Problem

I like reading this article a bit, so I'm surprised that I hadn't noticed this earlier. There is a problem with your picture in the Meeting the Dark Lord Section. You might want to check that out. Say it like it is... Or it was. 02:47, 20 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Darth Maul

Anyone with a brain cell can tell that is Darth Maul in the image. -NR- 16:30, 1 June 2007 (UTC)

• Oh, really? Would you like to tell me where his tattoos are then? Darth Abeonis _{Sith Council} ^{Sith Campaign}

[edit] Good job

I am really impressed with this article. Good job, and keep it coming. Wing ^msg 02:29, 20 June 2008 (UTC)

• Thank you. Darth Abeonis _{Sith Council} ^{Sith Campaign} 09:28, 20 June 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Praise

This is the very first article I read when I joined SWFanon. It is also what made me decide to stay and write my own articles. You are an inspiration to us all and I salute you. Thenorthernman